Hi Anna, I'm Selu from Red Hill School. I really like your Smiley poem. I also have a dog that's white and brown and her name is Lulu. I think you might have to add some spaces in the middle of some words. What is your dogs name?
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Hi Anna, I'm Selu from Red Hill School. I really like your Smiley poem. I also have a dog that's white and brown and her name is Lulu. I think you might have to add some spaces in the middle of some words.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your dogs name?